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Animals
13 ReviewsA one-shot based on the song 'Animals' by Nickelback. Gerard and Alex run away, what happens when she keeps hearing weird noises? :)
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(#) MyNameOkay 2010-01-24 03:37:38 PM
Dang! That Was Hot Lol ^^_^^
I Especially Like How Her Dad Started Beating His Ass ;P
I Would Like To See Where This Goes If You Were To Continue ^^_^^
MNOAuthor's response
:) Thanks! yeah lol the dad is an asshole... i may continue with this, depending on the reveiws :P x -
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(#) xxOurLadyofSorrowsxx 2010-01-24 05:55:52 PM
You made me sin! the thoughts you put in my head with that story is just... wow. i loved it! I really hope you continue with this i'm eager to find out what happens next! -
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(#) Luv-Bytes 2010-01-24 06:55:42 PM
Awww. I love the song and you did a great job of it. Its not exactly how I feel the song goes though. Some parts were, but some parts werent. Like the beginning is very energy in the song, theres no him sitting waiting outside for her, its more hes driving all kinds of wound up and picks her up quickly. And the line in the song about not talking with a full mouth is umm well it didnt happen in your story! lol I wouldve loved to see it happen though..
But you did say based on not exactly word for word the song.
Overall it was very very good. I do hope you consider making a few more chapters. You have very good characters here.
The dialogue between her dad and him was a little awkward though. I remember getting caught with a guy once and it sounded nothing like that. lol. Usually in high intensity scenes like that, theres not too much dialogue, just a lot of cursing.
Author's response
Thanks for reveiwing :) yeah i know i kinda changed some bits from the song but it was only to make it more my story instead of me just copying the song... lol i know i missed the mouth full bit out, and i didn't actually mean to i read your reveiw and i was like, "shit how could i foget that part?!" haha... oh well stupid me :) -
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(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2010-01-25 09:45:49 PM
Ah, I lurved it! Gerard.. "I ain't never done nothing she didn't want me to" made me laugh :)
I caught all the lines from the song! Even if some of 'em were changed a bit xD
You need to write another one-shot! Maybe use.. I dunno :) -
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(#) BandiitMarie 2010-02-06 12:40:18 PM
nice story!i like it! good job with matching it to the song!!
yea her dad is an ass haha -
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(#) breestar 2010-05-23 10:29:25 PM
Ohh, I love it. You should DEFINITELY continue. I loveee the song too!Author's response
wow i had no idea people were still reading this! lol... I'm not sure if i'll continue, i'm pretty wraed up in my other story 'Photograph' just now, so if i do conitinue this it won't be for a while. I'll see how things go, thanks for reveiwing! :) xo