Ray disagrees with the saying, "The best things in life are free" when he thinks of three people in his life.
(#) MyFamousLastWords 2010-02-06 12:23:12 PMI love when people write things like this. Normally no one writes things like this.
It makes sense though, I like it very much. I hope you write more stuff like this, I love your stuff.
Author's responseI'm glad you liked it. I will try my best to write more like this in the future.
Thanks for the review. It means so much coming from you. I always enjoy your reviews, because you always seem to have something constuctive to say.
(#) themission 2010-02-06 02:22:58 PMi loved how you ended each section with 'he desperately desired to be'. it really helped connect each part and bring it together :) and it was all so true and deep. when i read the part about what people sacrifice to be a musician i was like, 'that's exactly it, that's how i feel,' you captured it perfectly =]
Author's responseI'm so relieved that I did the musician part some justice. That was the one part that I feared I wouldn't display correctly. And hearing that I captured it right from a musician yourself makes me so happy. So thank you so much :D