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Blinded

The Keyblade is said to have saved the world.... ...and destroy it.

Category: Kingdom Hearts - Rating: PG - Genres: Angst, Drama - Characters: Mickey Mouse, Riku, Sora - Warnings: [?] - Published: 2006/04/19 - Updated: 2006/04/19 - 819 words - Complete

Reviews

• Blinded

  (#) Wolfic 2006-05-14 01:29:47 PM

  You are the best kingdom hearts fan fic writer i know so far and I would like to say that once again, you have amazed me with your way with words.

• Blinded

  (#) ross 2006-10-25 01:46:21 PM

  I thought it was very good. I can't wait for the next one

• Blinded

  (#) Ross_the_Boss 2008-05-14 09:49:37 AM

  Very original!!
  keep up the good work!

• Blinded

  (#) BlackAngelChick 2008-09-08 11:38:25 PM

  Ahh, how deep and meaningful. I love how sora is actually the villain in this, it's the most brilliant plot twist ever!

• Blinded

  (#) SakurasSong 2009-07-21 10:32:59 PM

  Ack, this thing has serious potential. I love the concept - turning Sora into the bad guy - but you never really implied just how the Light corrupted him. Some lines also seemed overdramatic, while others weren't dramatic enough. For example, the first few lines weren't vivid enough to hold a casual reader's attention, while the last lines came off as really, really cheesy. With most of the focus on battle and dialogue, the story's emotion fell flat, so Riku's tears seemed overdramatic.
  
  Not that I dislike the concept, or the entire story. It's original, I just feel like you could have done...MORE with it.

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