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He Needs a Vacation

A collection of SetoxReader short stories.

Category: Yu-Gi-Oh! - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Humor,Romance - Characters: Seto Kaiba - Published: 2010/02/23 - Updated: 2010/02/24 - 2306 words - Complete

Reviews

• He Needs a Vacation

  (#) IlovetheCoreys 2010-08-09 08:31:51 PM

  Brilliant! I like it. :) Very well-written, too.
  Keep up your awesome, super-cool, very brilliant and creative writing! :)

  Author's response

  Thank you! :D

• He Needs a Vacation

  (#) DragonSilk 2011-06-06 02:50:22 AM

  The shift from second person to first person was a little bit disconcerting. Maybe divide it by chapters in the future to lessen that a little?
  But overall I thought this was adorably fluffy. It was a nice little read.

  Author's response

  Thank you ^^ I was originally in separate chapters, I kind of got lazy with reposting after I organized my account.

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