Harry runs into a large problem. Where's the Potter Luck when you need it?
- It was a OK chapter. But I do think you should add a Slythrein and I think maybe harry should be with Tracey Davies and Daphne Greengrass.
Harry was with Daphne first...
I haven't finalized who Harry will be with yet for sure. Mostly, but not totally. :)
- Does Dobby have to smack a bitch?
The descriptions of Pansy were disgusting.
Pimp Dobby was hilarious, and Harry should have known that he wasn't to touch the Pimp Juice.
Author's responseGood Disgusting?
or Bad writer, poor style disgusting?
And yes. Yes Dobby had to smack a bitch. She was mouthing off.
Honestly, the whole elf thing always smacked more of pimp/prostitute vs master/slave to me.
But the pimp is so strong, the ho's smack themself...
- Definitely good disgusting. Your ability is not being called into question, Pansy's attractiveness however is very suspect.
Also, I probably should have put this on the Susan chapter, but I didn't think of it until now. That potion that Hermione gave him, I thought it was a contraceptive at first, but after what happened with Marietta and Susan, I'm beginning to think it was a potion that gave Harry's semen/sperm healing properties.