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Holly Evans and the Spiral Path
(#) longreachjones 2010-04-02
Another excellent chapter, even though I do have one admittedly small quibble.
Holly caving to Hermione simply because of a little shakespearean prose seems a little weak to me, though I'll withold judgement until I read the related Tangent.
By the way, loved the way you girl-talked Charlie into submission.Author's response
Thank you! Your insight is fair and reasonable- that bit of prose wasn't Holly's reason, just what she was willing to tell Minerva. (Yeesh! I better get moving on that Tangent!)Holly Evans and the Spiral Path
(#) DarthMarrs 2010-04-21
A very interesting story. A little disturbing, but very well written and interesting. I may have to go back over to ff.net and review there too.
Thanks for sharing this.Author's response
My pleasure! Generally the folks who enjoy it think the story is a little disturbing, while those that don't feel that the story is VERY disturbing and the writer more than a little disturbed.
Welcome to the minority!
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