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Okay so..I need help. I wrote this story for a assisignment for school, and I'm not so sure if I should turn it in. I'm kinda iffy about the whole story. So tell me whatcha think.
"Sweetheart? Darling? Turn around. It's me. Follow my voice. Everything is going to be okay,my love. Everything will be fine. It's all over now..."
I covered my ears with my hands and started rocking my body back and fourth. I could still hear her voice echoing in my mind.
"Mr.Armstrong,are you alright?" the farmilar voice asked me over the intercom.
I shook my head frantically."I hear her voice," I said.
"Annabel! Annabel's voice!" I shouted. "Don't you hear her?" I asked, still shouting. I was starting to get frustrated.
"..Daniel.." someone whispered in my ear.
"Annabel? Darling, I'm so sorry," I said. No answer. Then there was alot of whispers all around me. I tightly closed my eyes and covered my ears again."Go away!" I yelled. Then just like that, the room fell silent again. I opened my eyes.
"No one deserves to live like this, you know." I turned my head to see a man leaning against the wall wearing a long brown coat with a brown hat on his head. As usual, I couldn't see his face.
"You! It's all your fault my Annabel's gone!" I said, pointing at him.
He chuckled."Me? I didn't do anything. It was all you,"
"No. I would have never hurt her."
"Are you sure about that?"
He chuckled again."Fool," he took off his hat and threw it to me. When I caught it, I looked back at him and gasped. He looked exalty like me."I'm you."
"No!" I screamed. I jumped off my bed and ran to the two-way window where I knew they were watching me and started banging my fists on it."Help! He's here! Somebody please help me!"
I heard him laugh."I'm not going to hurt you,"
I turned back to him."I couldn't have hurt her." I whispered.
He was suddenly inches away from me. "But you did. We did. Don't you remember anything from that night?" he asked.
"No." I answered."Why?"
"Why? Who knows? Boredom? Or maybe for the fun of it." he shrugged
"Fun? How can..." I couldn;t say the word. "Murdering someone be fun?"
"You tell me," he smirked. At that instant,I remembered everything. The memory hit me like a ton of brickes. It started showing me pinning my poor Annabel against a wall,laughing as she tried to wiggle out of my grip. Her eyes were wide with total fear. Then, I slowly slit her throat with a knife. She let out a blood-filled scream. I laughed more. "Wasn't fun?" he asked.
I didn't say anything for a minute."Yes." I whispered.
He grinned."You want to do it again." It wasn't stated as a question. "I know you do." he whispered.
Then the door flew opened."Mr.Armstrong it's time for your nedication and shots,"my nurse walked in with a tray holding the needle and my pills. She smiled and handed me the pills. I threw them in my mouth and swallowed them without water. I held out my arm,ready for the shot. She gently took my arm and slowly picked up the needle.
"Do it." a voice said. I nodded. I quickly grabbed my nurse's wrist and took the needle out of her hand. "Do it." the voice repeated. I stabbed the nurse in the neck with the needle,injecting whateer medicine in her body. She screamed, I smiled. She fell to the floor and I ran out the room. An alarm sounded sounded as I ran in a hallway. I saw the entrance ahead of me. I ran full speed towards them.
I was outside,for the first time in years. I didn't stop running though. "Where are you going?" a voice in my head asked me. "To Annabel." I ran for God knows how long, until I was finally there. I fell to my knees. The only sound was the sea crashing against the rocks. I stared at her tomb for a long time. Annabel,my sweet,darling Annabel is here now. For all eternity. In her tomb by the sounding sea.
I was thinking. I don't think I should turn this in. It may be too violent with the stabbing and the slitting of the throats and such. Whatever I like it though.