(#) mysilentromance 2010-04-12I like how this is all emotion-based. Honestly, with a plot like the one you're writing, I think smut would just mess it up.
Every word that you have written has a great meaning to it. And it's really nice to read stuff like that.
Author's responsethank you, I'm still a little sky to post on this site because I'm not that familiar with it. So I appreciate your review a lot.
- okay just read it and of course i thought it was fantastic as usual...oh and i wanna say that i have NO IDEA why ficwad didn't show all of my comment for your last chapter....
yeah ayway i love Frank in this story i can be snappish like that sometimes...i'm not really bad i'll just spit a nasty comment out at somebody who is really just being human....but yeah my brother is worse he took his cd player out of his room and smashed it up against a tree....and then he threw the phone he was talking on so it smashed :/.
but yes anyway i can't explain it but i love the way he thinks...and the random little sentances in there. oh and the bit where he is the bathroom and it says "open the window frank" or "lock the door"
it's fucking awesome
i can't wait for the next chapter i love it, it really makes me think...i've always wanted to do something with adoption but in all honesty i prefer reading about it.
and if this sounds lame i don't care but i used to watch tracy beaker blush because i loved her character the whole I DON'T TAKE ANY ONES SHIT GOT THAT MOTHER FUCKERS thing she has going on is awesome...but then again thats just a defence mechanism she has....
oh when he broke the plate was so awesome i knew he'd jump when she touched him.... i could almost feel his skin writhing when it happened.
his sneaky little fag outta the window lol...but putting it out on his ankle....is it self harm with out him realising it?? is it for the sake of keeping it a secret?? i dunno but man it made me twitch in my seat lol i've been accidentally burned with a fag on my hand and it hurt like a bitch!!!
i love the bit where you...or frank lol...explain about how pain is different from hurt!!! that was epic...and so frickin true....
i can't beleive he called his mum :O and and and has he ever actually gotten to talk to her ??
gerards got his work cut out for him if expects frank to just open up.
his hearts in it though i think ...lol.
i love all his friends (espesh adam)
i really want to find out if this family are legit!!!!!!!!....and i want frank to realize that not everybody will give up on him :'(
i need more woman :P
but yes i am rambling but i hope ficwad lets you see everything i've wrote here !! >.<
kay love yah
xoxo Lottie oxox
Author's responsehiya girl, srry for the late reply and I 'm not even that sure ficwad will even spend this to you but anyway. just wanted to say THANK YOU from the botommm of ma heart for your review and I want you to know that I'm still working on this story. my life his just a pile of shit and OMGGIGS atm and I have NO TIME and this story is still a bitch to write, but I love you for reviewuing because it helps me a lot!
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