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Let This Go

'Lucy giggled, the sound like tiny bells ringing, Hannah smiled and held Lucy’s face in her hands. “I saw him Lucy, I honestly saw him.”'

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: R - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2010/04/14 - Updated: 2010/04/14 - 306 words

Reviews

• My Dark Angel

  (#) EvieSaunders 2010-04-14 02:29:52 PM

  I LOVED how you described Lucy's laugh like little bells, twas a beautiful line :)
  
  and ooh, what does the tattoo translate as?
  
  Another great chapter, keep it up!
  
  xo
  - Evie

  Author's response

  Why thank you :) I used it to try and show she's innocent, like childrens laughs are described like it.
  
  I'll explain the other bit in your other review :)
  
  Thanks for the review!
  Lu
  
  

• My Dark Angel

  (#) EvieSaunders 2010-04-14 02:31:56 PM

  Ohh never mind, I babelfished the tattoo wordy thingy and it came up as... I won't type it because you might not want people to know yet ^.^
  
  xo

  Author's response

  I'm glad you didn't reveal it, it may come up again later on in the text.
  Oh and translate the phycologists' name as well; Dr Folie, there's some irony there for you ;)
  
  I was in a french mood, no idea why lol
  
  thanks for the review!
  Lu

• My Dark Angel

  (#) wolf2008lllll 2010-04-14 04:27:42 PM

  Ha, I really love this story. It is so interesting; I love how distant the characters are and now they're so desperate to meet again. It's sweet, yet dark and mysterious at the same time.
  
  I googled the translated version of the tattoo, but only to check, I actaully did know what it said... I asumed more than anything really.
  I know a little Frech but It's not exsactly my strong point... ;)
  
  It means:
  '_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _'
  
  
  IT'S LIKE HANGMAN!!! Lol
  Hope you update soon. I was thinking, you write short chapters right? But what the hell does that matter, you update almost everyday, so if you wrote a chapter everyday without uploading it, then added up everything you'd wrote in a month; you'd have written more than over half the other authors on this site.
  
  So that was kinda random, but it's something that I only just reilised, I won't ask for longer chapters again. XD
  'Quality not Quantity' as my English teacher says. ^^

  Author's response

  glad you like the story
  
  and glad you guessed :)
  
  hangman? yesm...
  
  Updates up now :)
  
  haha, very clever thinking ;)
  and yes, as much as I hate to say it, teachers are normally right :/
  Thanks for the review!
  Lu

• My Dark Angel

  (#) wolf2008lllll 2010-04-14 04:50:57 PM

  Aw... The hangman bit didn't go into seperate words like it should have, I should have used forward slashes I really...
  I guess the translated text still means the same thing either way...
  
  Heh, ramble again... I'll just leave now... yeah... :S

• My Dark Angel

  (#) wolf2008lllll 2010-04-14 04:50:58 PM

  Aw... The hangman bit didn't go into seperate words like it should have, I should have used forward slashes I really...
  I guess the translated text still means the same thing either way...
  
  Heh, ramble again... I'll just leave now... yeah... :S

  Author's response

  haha dw about it :) still looked cool :)
  
  Your rambles are cute (:
  Lu

• My Dark Angel

  (#) shortygirl 2010-04-14 06:35:27 PM

  This is really good.
  please update

  Author's response

  Thanks :)
  next chapters up :)
  Lu

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