Jack and Sally's sixteen-year-old son has had enough; he's going goth.
(#) Neptune 2006-05-08 03:43:20 PM
I really liked this story; it's quite a nice take on all the goth kids Jack and Sally seem to breed.
One thing confused me, though: "Jack rubbed at the spot with his sleeve. With any luck, it hadn't affected the polish." Did you mean Timothy, or is my brain just not working?
(#) Axyli 2006-06-16 11:56:07 AM
I liked it! I never thought of Jack and Sally's kid being Goth...cool idea. But, I also got confused with the "Jack rubbed the spot..." Meh. Good story, none the less.
this story's cool. I love how you came up with the concept
(#) Silvana 2007-01-19 08:59:49 AM
Wow. My friend recommended this to me and it's really good!
(#) Sean 2007-06-11 07:31:49 PM
This story was really original. I was reading it and was like, "Well I wonder what Jack's reaction will be?". I never expected the goth outfit to be like our buisness suits! I thought that really made the story, for it was really unexpected. I loved it, and hope to see more like it.
(#) Reko (not logged in) 2007-07-02 04:44:35 PM
hii, I enjoyed this story, but at first i thought the point of timothy dressing like that was to anger his parents, but I think i may be wrong.
A little confusing but still a great job
This story is the definition of perfection. It's wonderful and intriguing. I like it so much, I'm adding it to my favorites. Rating points shall be handed out too. =D
The story's great and original.
Best one that I've seen today...
(#) annabel-lee 2011-03-27 06:07:40 AM
I thought that he wanted to freak his parents out, so the ending made me laugh. Very Halloween Town! I love it!