(#) jabarber69 2010-04-28Excellent as usual... Well worth the wait... I really love the way you write...especially the way this chapter was written. also like him being gray, which is a more modern or I should say realistic look on things.... also I really like this harry and hermione but hey dont forget luna too, those three just seem to mesh together you know!!!
- A minor question - did the Death Eaters take one of their own back with them? Or was one of them of "special interest" to the DMLE? Harry got three, and then another four, but the Daily Prophet only reported on six of them. If the DMLE is keeping the seventh one under wraps, that opens the door to all sorts of possibilities.
Author's responsepoop -- error on my part. I'll have to cut the number or add a name
(#) stargatesg1fan1 2010-05-14Don't listen to anybody about the narrative nature of your fic. They may say they can write but until they prove it they can kiss your ass. I like this fic a lot so far. The H/Hr is great...I hope they end up permanently together. I like Harry's somewhat subtle power. I look forward to the intensifying of the H/Hr relationship. Thanks for writing.
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