(#) jabarber69 2010-04-28Excellent as usual... Well worth the wait... I really love the way you write...especially the way this chapter was written. also like him being gray, which is a more modern or I should say realistic look on things.... also I really like this harry and hermione but hey dont forget luna too, those three just seem to mesh together you know!!!
- A minor question - did the Death Eaters take one of their own back with them? Or was one of them of "special interest" to the DMLE? Harry got three, and then another four, but the Daily Prophet only reported on six of them. If the DMLE is keeping the seventh one under wraps, that opens the door to all sorts of possibilities.
Author's responsepoop -- error on my part. I'll have to cut the number or add a name
- I don't know how killing dark wizards can be gray. Harry seems to have the same moral clarity as always, just now he isn't willing to let the dark wizards come back and kill/rape/torture again. Seems pretty light to me--just not the hypocritical light we are used to.
Hermione should be grilling Harry for all his knowledge. So far, she is too easy going and OOC for the "knowledge at all costs" of canon!Hermione.
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