Anna reveals some of her past to Gerard.
- Hooray! Bob and Claire. How cute. :)
Annnddd fangirl squeal I GOT MY NAME INTO AN AUTHOR'S NOTE!!......ahem.
But in any event, something makes me think that "antiseptic" is not all it seems. I think Mikey knows something's up, too. I pictured him giving Gerard the squinty eyes of suspicion after he vaguely talked about his injury.
AHH poor Anna. No one deserves that. I liked how Gerard stepped into the protective manly role, that made me smile :)
Don't worry about your uber long sentences too much. You'll find that as time goes on, it'll start improving all on its own.
Lovely update, I can't wait to see what lurks for us in the next installment :D
(#) FamousLastWords09 2010-05-10 02:27:30 AMSo Bob and Claire huh? Yayness I think they'll make a nice couple.
Poor Anna I'm sad about what happened to her but its sounds like she got her revenge on the nasty man. I hope she ripped his man bits off lol
I don't know why but this line made me really laugh “Hey I gotta get back in there to my breakfast or Alicia will eat it.” I think its funny because I know my fella would say something similar about me.
Can't wait for more as usual.
(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2010-05-10 06:53:45 AMooh, ooh and wow!
OK so although Anna is sharing some memories with Gerard, she is changing the story and holding some info back. who was the attractive man that saved her and killed the rapist? hmmmm?
and why have they so little time?
and she knew there was blood goddamit! haha! and what did Claire put on the wound?
this is great. roll on the next chapter!
(#) icyblue858 2010-05-10 10:42:52 AMOkay so I read all of your stories and started to read this one a few days ago and just caught up! Of course I LOVE IT! I love all of your stories! I just can't figure out what she is quite yet, I mean I had a few theories but you add something to the mix and it throws me off! Keeps it nice and mysterious! Keep it up and i can't wait for the next chapter!