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Crippled

We all have problems. Everyone does. It's just that me and my team has more than others.

Category: House - Rating: G - Genres: Drama, Humor - Characters: Allison Cameron, Eric Foreman, Gregory House, Robert Chase - Published: 2006/04/23 - Updated: 2006/04/23 - 123 words - Complete

Reviews

• Crippled

  (#) Jelly_Belly 2006-04-25 02:52:18 PM

  Please Read and Review. Yes it is short. But it took a long time to get it right. And I'd love some pointers!

• Crippled

  (#) Ithilwen 2006-04-25 03:55:05 PM

  This make a nice point, but it needs more editing.
  
  "It's just that me and my team has more than others," for example, should be, "It's just that my team and I have more than others."
  
  This is from House's perspective, right? His speech is kind of colloquial, but mostly he uses correct American English.

  Author's response

  Thank you.

• Crippled

  (#) wezza88 2006-05-16 04:14:34 AM

  It was short but sweet! Love it! Need to write more house fics

  Author's response

  Thank you!

• Crippled

  (#) Kat 2006-09-11 02:44:02 AM

  Nice. Pretty much ture.....very nice.

• Crippled

  (#) hide 2006-10-11 03:28:01 PM

  wow that was very interesting and very true. Foreman just doesnt shut up does he?
  ~hide

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