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Crippled

by Jelly_Belly 5 Reviews

We all have problems. Everyone does. It's just that me and my team has more than others.

Category: House - Rating: G - Genres: Drama, Humor - Characters: Allison Cameron, Eric Foreman, Gregory House, Robert Chase - Published: 2006/04/23 - Updated: 2006/04/23 - 123 words - Complete

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  • Crippled

    (#) Jelly_Belly 2006-04-25 02:52:18 PM

    Please Read and Review. Yes it is short. But it took a long time to get it right. And I'd love some pointers!
  • Crippled

    (#) Ithilwen 2006-04-25 03:55:05 PM

    This make a nice point, but it needs more editing.

    "It's just that me and my team has more than others," for example, should be, "It's just that my team and I have more than others."

    This is from House's perspective, right? His speech is kind of colloquial, but mostly he uses correct American English.

    Author's response

    Thank you.
  • Crippled

    (#) wezza88 2006-05-16 04:14:34 AM

    It was short but sweet! Love it! Need to write more house fics

    Author's response

    Thank you!
  • Crippled

    (#) hide 2006-10-11 03:28:01 PM

    wow that was very interesting and very true. Foreman just doesnt shut up does he?
    ~hide

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