- Heh, definitely a major glitch there as Harry gets entered again (though it should be somewhat easier for him this time). I have to say I love your term for Snape, "The Dark Prince", and I'm certain he won't care at all for it. Malfoy as "the real Hogwarts Champion? Hogwarts is doomed this time. On the other hand, 'twill be interesting to see who did enter Harry and how/why. 'Tis going to be a very interesting year, no matter what Harry does.
Oh, I admit that I love how he controlled Yaxley into those admissions; I can see the 'establishment' getting rather shaken up as Madame Bones cleans house.
(#) red_jacobson 2010-05-18Interesting chapter, and, like Cateagle, I'm wondering who entered Harry, although Snape's smirk does seem to point to him.
I'll admit, I'm a bit annoyed that you had Draco's name come out of the Goblet, simply because, in a story i'm working on, Harry caused the exact same thing to happen! GRIN
- Shrugs.....if Snape was stupid enough to enter Harry into that farce he deserves the stomping that is on the way. I wonder if the Dark Prince will end up sliced, diced, and fried because of it? As for Malfoy, Fleur and Viktor should have little trouble outclassing him; after all "Daddy Dearest" isn't around to bribe the judges. It looks as though Harry's plans are working out fairly well; and I loved the scenes at the Wizengamot and Hogwarts! Hmmm...now that Sirius has been cleared could he get into the Lestranges' vault? If so, Harry might get an early Christmas present - the end of Voldy! The international press will definately see how much Hogwarts has declined with Malfoy competing! Thanks again for another fun chapter! :)
Author's responseSirius can't get the Cup, alas. Harry will have to actually think this through (no dragon riding this time!)
(#) GinnyMyLove 2010-05-18You had Delores "splitch" instead of Splinch, but other than that a very enjoyable chapter.
It does seem you are "telling" rather than having the characters reveal things but with so much information I suppose thats just the format this story is going to take.
Still looking forward to the next installment.
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