(#) aredphxbird2 2010-05-18Great chapter,I wish you would have described old Snape's face with Draco Malfoy's name being released.Poor Lucius better get to Hogwarts to get his son out of the Tri-wizard or start preparing a grave site for his son.Awaiting next update.
Author's responseLucius was one of the Deatheaters killed at the Quidditch Cup. He ain't going nowhere!
- I really had no idea what was happening with Yaxley until pretty much the last line. A nice application of an Imperius! And a bit of a shock to see it employed by the 'good guys'. Well, hit-man Harry, someone I'm still feeling dubious about (even if our Hermione is solidly in his court!).
The death of the three students was much more farcical, of course.
Snape putting Harry's name into the goblet and Harry Draco's was amusing. If there is any real danger to the contestants - and there is, isn't there? - then this is another count against Harry as being 'evil', deliberately putting Malfoy in danger.
But it is Draco, hmmm ... :-)
- Well, unless Draco is better than canon!Draco, we should see the end of the Malfoy line with the first task.
Would like a lot more details about Sirius getting free and the scandal and the Crouches and the scandal and Fudge and the scandal (surely it would be of no real effort to show many of Fudge's crimes and that of other Purees (may they truly be pureed). Also, I would love to have heard Hermy and her parents ranting about the injustices being exposed and threatening to remove Herms and Harry ASAP.
Story is too good to swiftly fly through all the fun stuff. The toad was killed too quickly and Snape should have snuffed it a month ago.
I always liked getting Moldie under the Draught of Living Death and then going out and searching any and all means he used to stay alive.
Wil McG ever realize what an ass-licking sycophant she has become?
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