Harry's first year at Hogs in the Immortal Fangs Universe. Not for Snape lovers
- Should of
None of these phrases are correct. If you ever HEAR someone say them, they are either cracked in the head, or they are actually using the contraction for "have".
Should have (should've)
Would have (would've)
Might have (might've)
Could have (could've)
May have (may've)
Example from your story: "...I would of feared you..."
Remove the "would" and you get: "...I of feared you..."
Does that make sense? No.
Now try it with "have" or its contraction: "...I would have (/would've/) feared you..."
"...I have feared you..."
Do these make sense? Yes, yes they do.
And keep an eye on the rouge/Rogue thing; you slipped once, but it's clear it was a typo, not a lack of understanding, so kudos to you.
- This is a good chapter, and besides some grammer mistakes. you have made a good return. And now that you are writing again will we see you update Oaths of Fantasy? And I am wondering who will be the unlucky person who has to face an angry Harry Potter.
- I enjoy the story thus far, but I am a tad bit confused. In your first fic of immortal fangs, I recall a mention of Narcissa, but that was all it was. In this story, she is not only mentioned, but also a participant. How did she come into the picture when she wasn't even involved directly in the first story? You might want to focus on completing the first story, so the continuing stories make sense. Other than that, the story is well written, and an interesting read. Keep up the great work!