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The First Time

Ranma finds out that training and instinct make it easy to cross the line, especially for the first time.

Category: Ranma 1/2 - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst - Characters: Akane, Kodachi, Ranma - Warnings: [!!] [V] - Published: 2006/04/24 - Updated: 2006/04/24 - 731 words - Complete

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• The First Time

  (#) Genericrandom5 2006-05-24 02:09:33 PM

  Not your usual fair, and not your best work, but I don't feel to have wasted my time or anything similar for having read this. I think that it might have been better served by being longer, or focusing more on Ranma's reaction to actually having killed, but it was a decent work. Not great, but pretty good. As always, I look forward to anything one of my favorite authors puts out in the future. Maybe another Eva story, or a continuation of your current one? Regardless, keep it up.

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