As the title says, this is the redraft of The Mistake.
(#) teachergirl 2010-06-09 05:39:47 PMThere's slow and then there's too slow. You have to give your readers something so that they want to read your story. It all seems so random--Ginny's with a drunk who is pretending be suicidal? Hermione and Harry are married but had some sort of falling out that Hermione took public? It all seems too unlikely. If there was a rating category of weird that's why I'd classify this story as.
Author's responseIf you're still reading the story, I'd have to explain that all this is just setting up the story. You can't have the plot with no development.
I don't profess myself an expert, but I've read way too many fanfictions where everything goes from Point A straight to Point Z, I wanted to avoid that.
I want to keep it slow, to let loose the idea of, having your cake and eating it (however that saying goes)
Thanks for your review though.