This world after the story. . . .
- Okay, just be straight with me, is Harry the father of Luna's children? I mean, green eyes, and she always seemed to know where Harry and Hermione were?
Anyway, this was a wonderful read, and now I've been even more inspired to start playing around with an redo idea I had where Harry and Hermione, from different dimensions timetravel (and dimension hop in Hermione's case).
Author's responseOh yes, with Hermione's approval
good luck with your story
(#) Jonn_Wolfe 2013-12-28 01:27:22 PM:Second time read through:
Like what you did, especially with the take charge attitude and messing with the minds of Dimbles and Snape. Also like how those two went out with Moldy, and was just ambiguous enough so that no one really knew what was going on.
Would've liked to have seen a bit more interaction between Harry and Hermione, but that's just me. Love that you had Harry be the father for Luna's children... more could've been touched on there as well, but it was still good to see.
Overall, I really like this story. Excellent work!