- Okay, just be straight with me, is Harry the father of Luna's children? I mean, green eyes, and she always seemed to know where Harry and Hermione were?
Anyway, this was a wonderful read, and now I've been even more inspired to start playing around with an redo idea I had where Harry and Hermione, from different dimensions timetravel (and dimension hop in Hermione's case).
Author's responseOh yes, with Hermione's approval
good luck with your story
(#) Jonn_Wolfe 2013-12-28:Second time read through:
Like what you did, especially with the take charge attitude and messing with the minds of Dimbles and Snape. Also like how those two went out with Moldy, and was just ambiguous enough so that no one really knew what was going on.
Would've liked to have seen a bit more interaction between Harry and Hermione, but that's just me. Love that you had Harry be the father for Luna's children... more could've been touched on there as well, but it was still good to see.
Overall, I really like this story. Excellent work!
- WOW! What a strange story. First I've read like it but damn, it was well worth the read. Please do continue and tell those who flame to do better if they don't like it!
Author's responseThanks for all the reviews! I'm glad you enjoy some of the stories.
- But of course the Higher Powers of Magic and Light were happy! No more nitwit Dumbledore to truly foul thing up! I'm truly not at all surprised that Luna had two green eyed daughters upon her return to England. It is my opinion that she truly loved only Harry and with Hermiones' agreement Harry gave her her daughters. Wonderful story. Well worth reading.
- Thanks for finishing it. Enjoyable.
Too bad after getting rid of Riddle, Malfoy, Bumbles, and Snape, they didn't keep up the good work.
Author's responseActually, this was finished a long time ago; I just noticed a particular typo that bugged me and fixed it -- I didn't realize it would show as new -- silly me, I should have known better
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