Just read it, I hate summaries!
- I accidentally stumbled onto this story and I read it twice in a row. You have such a fantastic handling of tone and such sincere character development. Your voice is very clear throughout the piece. I am really excited to see what happens with Olivia simply because she has become such a multifaceted character. You clearly are a writer and not some crazed 13 year old. I have seen this as more of a story than a "fanfic." I can't wait to read all of your work. Cant wait for the next update!
Author's responseThank you so much! That means alot!
(#) doyleangel 2010-06-28 01:26:59 PMMan, Gee can be a jerk. he shouldn't have taken his anger out on Olivia, but at least he apologized and she understood. I love how she said that Krystal couldn't see Jade. It shows how much she cares for the little girl.
Can't wait for the next update!!