Not a sky for the dead, not a grave for the living. Why would the world tear them so?
(#) i_bleed_neon 2010-10-05 12:28:40 AMthis is amazing. it actually made me want to cry and my heart ached a little while reading this.
Author's responseThank you so much! It's my first attempt at something like this and it hurt a little to write it too. I wanted to simulate the cruel situation to myself I guess. So happy im getting good responses :]
(#) thatjerokid 2010-10-13 11:29:21 PMYou did a really good job on this! It was amazingly detailed and so sad....
Author's responseThanks so much! I'm so glad it doesn't seem to confusing.
I made it up on the spot instead of writing it in a notebook beforehand. its better that way i think.
Thanks again! xo
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2011-04-07 09:30:53 AMAww this was really sweet and sad. really well written as well. as i think iv said i didnt really like your "What happens after class" one but this was amazing! great detail as well! loved it!
Author's responseAh thanks, its my pride and joy :)
Yeah I know not everyone will enjoy that sorta stuff, considering putting up the rating perhaps or putting a better warning at the start?
(#) Kid_Vicous 2011-04-07 10:35:46 PMWell, you know we've had our differences over another fic but seriously, this was fantastic. Really well written and generally moving. Just the right amount of descrption as well. I noticed one or two spelling and grammar mistakes but nothing major and nothing anyone but me will care about. But amazing. Great work.
Author's responseThanks so much. I'm so happy people are liking this one, I wrote this one on the spot entirely. Good to know people think it's good and not just another 'dying' fic.