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Salvation

Harry has defeated Lord Voldemort, but all is not as it seems. Betrayal, dark ambition, and schemes that Harry wants no part of force Harry to flee to France, where he may meet the one person who c...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Angst,Fantasy,Romance - Characters: Dumbledore,Fleur,Harry - Warnings: [V] [X] [?] - Published: 2010/06/29 - Updated: 2010/06/29 - 3174 words

Reviews

• Salvation

  (#) jabarber69 2010-06-29 11:35:18 AM

  So far I like the story, but Harry should of just went ahead and killed dumbydork, and then obliviated the other 3 idiots....I wonder if they even thought of the next dark lord that they insinuated was forming into harry potter was in fact dumbydork himself, of course not, since he had brainwashed them... hey since harry is basically the head of house black couldnt he do something to tonks, that is if she and her mum have been welcomed back into the house of black....
  
  I say again, Harry made a huge mistake in leaving dumbydork alive!!! and by killing dumbydork and obliviating the other three wouldnt have started him down the road to darkness, he said himself that he couldnt go dark per that crystal thingy, but by taking out dumby he would be insuring his and gin safety....

• Salvation

  (#) minerdude 2010-06-29 12:10:23 PM

  I love the part where Dumbles talked about Harry killing him was a path to the darkness, at the same time explaining why He had to kill Harry-- will be sad if Mione is on Dumbles' side, don't mind about the weasleys

• Salvation

  (#) aka_thenewguy 2010-07-09 10:33:28 PM

  Excellently done. A most enjoyable begining.

• Salvation

  (#) ROBERT_1958 2010-07-16 08:38:46 PM

  As Harry is probly Lord Black, as Harry is Sirius Black's Godson. Nymphadora Tonks went agents the Black family when she fought Harry (bad move on her part).
  
  Where are Dobby & Winky & Hedwig?
  
  

• Salvation

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2010-07-23 08:13:18 AM

  Very good start. Looks like a very good non canon story. Love them.
  
  gunny

• Salvation

  (#) siledubhghlase 2010-07-24 10:20:45 AM

  Nice start. I couldn't help but notice Dumbledore's duplicity. It's all fine and good if Dumbles kills Harry to keep him from becoming the next Dark Lord, but what does that make Dumbles? A Dark Lord. I wonder how many compulsion charms he cast on Moody, Dung, and Tonks to convince them to attack Harry? Dumbles has gone round the twist.
  
  I have only one complaint and that is the size of the "small room" you described in which Harry wiped out Tom's cannon fodder. 100 yards by 200 yards is twice the size of the NFL regulation playing field. That's not a small room, even with 150 people in it. Now...10 yards by 20 yards would be cramped for that many people.
  
  Anyway, good job so far, so I'm going to read on.
  
  SD

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