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Paper Cuts
1 ReviewsMy first story mentioning addiction. >.
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Paper Cuts
(#) MyNameOkay 2010-11-15 08:32:04 PM
I Like Your Mini-Story Lines, But I Think You Need To Get A Story Line And Stick With It.. I Think You Could Possibly Make Something Great.
Oh, And There Were A Few Punctuation Errors, but Thats Okay;P
MNOAuthor's response
You mean like chapters? I've tried that but haven't had much luck. Maybe I could try again. Thanks :)