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Chapter Three: Meeting the Third, Sealing the Trio

by quilla04 12 Reviews

The third member of the bond is revealed.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG - Genres: Fantasy,Humor,Romance - Characters: Harry,Hermione - Warnings: [!] [?] - Published: 2010/08/05 - Updated: 2010/08/05 - 3046 words

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  • Serpent Souls, Merged as One

    (#) ElitaPrime18 2010-08-12 02:55:42 PM

    Same as the other author. Why have you disabled the positive ratings? I really wanted to give you a A++ as well. Congrats. Can't wait for the next few chapters if u r still making them. If not perhaps I can help with the spelling and the grammar. My math teacher taught me that so I'm quite good at it. And so can you. Well done.
  • Serpent Souls, Merged as One

    (#) ROBERT_1958 2010-08-27 09:28:07 AM

    I am not trying to tell you what to write, here are few ideas:

    Daphne & Hermione should have had an inheritance test run on them.

    Harry Daphne & Hermione should be checked for any Magical or Non-Magical Black on them or tracking Spells or devices on them or their things.

    I am glad the inheritance test shows Skills as well as who the person is related to.

    I hope Dobby and Winky will show up sooner then they do in cannon to help Harry & his family (I realy like both Dobby and Winky), I hope both Elves will be in this story more then they were in cannon.

    While Harry and his family are at
    Gringotts, they should have a look at Potter's Original will(s).

    While Harry and his family are at
    Gringotts, Harry Daphne & Hermione should see a list of all the business (both Magical and Non-Magical), properties, money, stocks, bonds, jewels, as well as anythang else they owns.


    In cannon, Harry pulled Lord Godric Griffindor's sword from the Sorting Hat, so Harry should be the heir to Godric Griffindor.

    If Harry or his bonded are Hair to at least of the other three (Harry should be heir to two of Hogwarts Founders.) Hogwarts Founders, Harry and his bonded own Hogwarts.

    If Harry & his bonded own Hogwarts, they need to fire Dumbledore and not alow him or any of his allies to enter Hogwarts ever again, as well as NOT allow anyone who has the Dark Mark to ever enter Hogwarts or any one who created the Dark Mark, or anyone that means harm to the students at Hogwarts, to ever enter Hogwarts!!!

    As Sirius Black is Harry's Godfather, Harry should be Lord Black as Sirius Black is in Azkaban.

    Once Harry finds out about Sirius Black being his Godfather, Harry and the Greengrasses need to get Sirius Black a fair trial, and see Sirius Black set free.

    If Harry is Lord Black, Harry needs to nulify both Narcissa Malfoy's, & Bellatrix LeStrange's marages, as well as disowned them from the Black family, as well as the getting the dowries returned to the Black family, and any prophet from any Black family money they revived, as well as bringing Tonks and her parents back into The Black Family, if they can be trusted.

    Albus Dumbledore as well as Minerva McGonagall and Hagrid (Minerva McGonagall did not stop Dumbledore from Harry going to the Dudleys, as well as kidnapping Harry, and Hagrid brought Harry to the Dudleys) needs to made to do HARD labor, without using his Magic in the Goblin mines till they DIE, for putting Harry with the Dudleys, as well as, if ilegial blocks and or spells were put on Harry by Dumbledore, as well as the Dudleys to goto prison for what they did to Harry.

    EVERYTHANG that Albus Dumbledore, Minerva McGonagall, Severus Snape, and the Dudleys have need to be given to Harry, for what thay have allowed to happen to Harry.

    -> Hagrid just needs a good warning about what he did to Harry on Dumbledore's orders as Hagrid is a smiple trusting person. It would be good if Hagrid could finsh his Magical schooling.

    -> Albus Dumbledore put Harry with the Dudleys, so Albus Dumbledore is just as responble as the Dudleys for how Harry was treated by the Dudleys, as Albus Dumbledore was an
    accessory to how Harry was treated by the Dudleys.

    Fawkes needs to unbond with DumbleDORK (for what DumbleDORK has done to Harry and others) and bond to Harry, or whomever Fawkes wishes to bond with.

    In the Harry Potter and mostly in the Fan Fics Dumbledore never gets in trubble for what he allowed Harry to go through at the Dudleys or at Hogwarts.

    Snape needs to goto Azkaban for all the thangs he has done to Harry and his family.

    -> Snape over haeard the prophecy and repoted it to Voldemort, thus puttig Harry and his fmily in danger.

    Looking for more of this fine story.

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