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We're Not Having Fun

by AddixxSin 3 Reviews

A repost of my old story from my other account.So what if the Way brothers were your relatives? Family reunion time!

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: G - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2010/08/11 - Updated: 2010/08/11 - 1704 words

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  • We're Not Having Fun

    (#) shortygirl 2010-08-11 01:13:43 PM

    Gerard not a good start....
    update soon
  • We're Not Having Fun

    (#) DeathCookie 2010-08-11 02:45:23 PM

    Yey! Post all the other chapters, too!
  • We're Not Having Fun

    (#) disasters1 2010-08-11 02:52:29 PM

    I think a way you could make this story even stronger would be to remove the - - things that mark when a period of time has changed. You have a strong enough sense of what you want to tell that you could write without these "- next day-" or "-later-" and your readers would follow. P.S I think we all our on your team, family reunions blow.

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