For Yaoi Challenge 2006: Advent Children AU. Pre-Nibelheim, Sephiroth discovers that there are others like him in ShinRa's labs. He does something about it.
- Oooh! What a yummy concept! All three of my favorite silver haired biseinen getting it on (maybe menage a trois style?)! I mean Sephiroth, Loz and Yazoo, cause I don't know how you'd fit an underaged kid like Kadaj into the menage, except as a typical teenaged peeping tom...and I do still remember being a teen, and being slightly perverted that way.
(#) yamisukui 2006-06-15 03:17:31 PMThis is a brilliant piece!
It's all I can do not to disslove into a blubbering heap. The chracterization was dead on and so very different from how other people would think to write them in this situation! Is there any chance that there could be more?
(#) ReaperRain 2007-07-28 02:18:01 PMVery, VERY good. It's cute how naive the three of them are - but also saddening, in it's own way. I personally thought Sephiroth moved a little too fast with Loz rather than denying himself the act or at least considering the morals, but even so, it was good. I'd like to see more Loz/Yazoo in the future, since that's my fav pairing.
- Wow, this was a great read! I never read fics about Kadaj, Yazoo, and Loz, but because of this I warmed up immensely to them, especially Loz.
I like how you wrote Zack and Sephiroth's characters, and how you conveyed their personality through their thoughts and actions when dealing with the the three of them.
I really like your writing style, and you were able to convey a lot of emotion in even scenes that did not bluntly try to do so.
Keep it up!