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Ring
(#) Ithilwen 2006-05-20
This is almost too true to be enjoyable.
The ending could stand to be a little stronger. It cuts off, as if there's more. I don't think that you should tell us what the narrator's conflict with the other person was, but maybe a bit more of a resolve over how he/she felt about it.Author's response
Interesting thoughts. I'll try to revisit this sometime and see if I could strengthen the ending.Ring
(#) fruit_addict 2007-03-16
good story. I think the ending was just fine personally. Added some zip.Ring
(#) MissTootyJones 2012-08-21
Absolutely loved the ending. Wrapped up a short prose piece nicely. I'd love to see more for each lantern corps; the inner thought process of those who personify the colors. Great job!
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