(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2010-08-25oh God, what will Amber do?! she has to come clean, and get it over with!
poor Frankie, he is a broken mess. and it's so weird to read Lyn being so nice. i like that there still is a fiesty side to her, and Marcus did always make me laugh.
a happy Gerard is sweet to read, bless him. i think he may get his heart broken? but who knows...well on ly you, so tell us soon!
(#) doyleangel 2010-08-25I wonder whats going to happen when Chey finds out that Lynn spent the night with Frank. Not that anything happened, but still, she's probably not going to be too happy. Not that she can do anything about it, she did choose Gerard after all.
So Richard has now caught Amber in a lie...interesting. I wonder how long it will take for him to figure out the truth. I still want Amber and Bob to be together.
I'm still waiting to find out about stuff from the beginning of the story. Don't think I've forgotten about it.
P.S. I don't know if you know, but chapter 3 of "Best Things" is up now
(#) SmashAuthority2 2010-08-27This is my second attempt to review this chapter! damn you, Ficwad!
Okay, so Chey needs to "man up" and break it off with Gee, get together with Frank and live happily ever after. (If Gee will let them, of course)
Bob and Amber need to get back together as well. She still loves him and not that other dude.
It would be awesome if Lyn told Gee about the affair. That would be explosive stuff/ Maybe throw in a Frank/Gee fist fight? lol
Can't wait to read more! xx
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