Chapter 008: What Reality Really Looks Like
(#) mariah 2006-05-11 05:53:47 PMi love this storry!!!! im kinda sad its over thow =( owell. sorry i havent ben checking evry day i was grounded and then between homework, band practis (me and my friends named our band Kreosene, im the drummer), brother and sister fighting over the internet and all the stress that comes with the end of 8th grade year i'v been more than busy.
Author's responseI'm just glad you got to read the rest of it. :) Thanks for fighting your sib for the internet, you're pretty rad, m'dear.
(#) Orla 2006-06-07 02:34:28 PMI loved the whole story and I also read learning to trust and they go so well together.I love your serious attitude towards the whole love vibe but ur playfullness by lightening moments with humour in the voice of Mikey!
Author's responseAin't Mikey grand, so maleable to the palate; in a good way. :) Thanks.
(#) kviciousbenji 2006-07-11 08:11:32 AMI have recently finished reading this as well as the first story Learning To Trust both, in which, I enjoyed very much. Pengz, I have to say you are indeed a very talented writer and I enjoy all of your stories. Please, I hope you write more because you have such a great talent that shouldn't go unoticed :)
Author's responseAwww shucks! :) Thank you & yes, I am still writing. I hope you check out my other MCR fics!
(#) Alison 2006-10-30 11:04:11 PMYea for 'happy endings' k well i didnt like the whole 'gay mikey' thing cause i love mikey to death! and also i liked how they got married in utah cause i live in utah...and utah rocks! hehe jk it actually kinda sucks but whatever! and i liked how that whole thing was a dream cause it was really depressing and all! but anyway great idea it was perfect! good job!
Author's responseThanks for reading both parts. :D I really appreciate your positive feedback too!
(#) luckysgc921 2006-12-02 10:58:46 PMwow.
I just found your stories about 1 1/2 hours ago and read through this and its predecessor.
I loved them both, truly brilliant work. Mina was an interesting character and your writing and characterizations got progressivly better as the stories went along.
I'm definitly gonna see what your other ones are like tomorrow (its 2am now..)
'can't wait to check them out.
Author's responseWow to you , too for taking the time out to read my stuff. Your kudos are much appreciated! :)
(#) katherine 2007-01-02 12:20:05 AMIn Learning to Trust i was disapointed how Frankie's character acted with the miscarriage and all, and when my sister found the sequel of this novel i was like yes!! he might be there for her this time around. when i got to the last chapter and found out it was all her hallucinations the story became dumb to me. Her halluciantions should of been true and in the end Frankie should of died and Mina should have been put into a mental institution or something like that, but other than that i like the story. keep it up.
Author's responseThanks for reading!
There was a voting on who Mina should have ended up with which took place after chapter 002 (KKPC) and was hosted on another site. The voting was in Frankie's favor and I decided that this, among at most six alternate endings, was the best ending to suit the results. The mental/death thing was one of the alternate endings I had written if there was a tie between Frank and Pete--are you psychic?
(#) isuckatlifen 2007-01-02 05:50:11 PMhuh puppies what the fuck. ok now that i pointed out my confusion id would like to say i loved your story even if it is like 2 years old but i decided to start from the last page so what can i say?
Author's responseOh it was a joke my friend had me write in for comic relief. Thanks for finishing up/reading. You're rad. :)