All Lila wanted was for her brother to be nicer to her. All Harry wanted was a family who cared. When fate intervenes, both get their wish, but at what cost?
(#) Daemonwelsh 2011-05-29 08:06:25 PMInteresting beginning, I am eager to see how this story is fleshed out, and what it evolves into. Who is that character in the between, and is his purpose malicious?
Good story so far, grammar is good, though the descriptions of what goes on might be better if you expand on them a bit more. (So she is plain, explain what she looks like). Good story, and I await the next bit.