Julie comforts Frankie.
(#) TheGabification 2010-09-15 03:36:07 PMOnly one review? I'm so surprised! Your story deserves way more than that. I absolutely love this story. It's just fantastic! It's so original and it's the perfect blend of everything. It has the perfect mix of FrankiexGerard and MikeyxOC that I just squeal everytime there's some sort of fluff or interaction between the characters. I don't have much of a problem with your story aside from the fact that you capitalize "My, You, Them, etc" when you really need not to. The only time you use capital letters is in personal pronouns and names of places and people. But that's not hard to push aside and enjoy the story, obviously since I loved your story, even though I consider myself to be a bit of a freak about grammar ^__^" Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens.
Author's responseThanks for the grammar tips. I'm really glad that You find the story enjoyable- I work so hard but I rarely get anyone writing back about it. Please don't hesitate to tell me how i am doing!