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Promises

by InuKag 3 Reviews

...I thought it was perfect, Even with the lies, I just never saw ... they were hidden in your eyes....

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG - Genres: Angst, Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2006/05/05 - Updated: 2006/05/06 - 194 words - Complete

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  • Promises

    (#) Haruno sakura 2006-05-07 01:18:44 PM

    coooooool I mean! nice!
  • Promises

    (#) MarkPoa 2006-05-08 07:54:36 PM

    This may sound bad for such a sad poem, but I found the poem to be pretty fun to read. Easy on the eyes. Just a suggestion: may need more imagery.
  • Promises

    (#) lilyqueen777 2006-11-07 08:38:12 PM

    wow i can feel the emotion, u left me in tears :)

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