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After his ill-fated trip to the Department of Mysteries that led to the death of his godfather, Harry Potter decides he must take control of his own life. But if a certain Gryffindor know-it-all ha...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama,Romance - Characters: Harry,Hermione - Warnings: [!!!] - Published: 2010/09/28 - Updated: 2010/09/28 - 5616 words

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• No More Mysteries

  (#) Mionefan 2010-09-28 01:59:17 PM

  Pretty good so far. Maybe the meeting with the Dursleys will get them to co-operate with sending letters to Hermione. Looking forward to where you're taking this.

• No More Mysteries

  (#) Twinsen88 2010-09-29 11:10:42 PM

  I like it so far. keep it up

• No More Mysteries

  (#) Lepple 2010-10-10 10:21:33 PM

  Poor Harry, his brain's clearly scrambled.
  He's smart enough to realise he can't trust Dumbledore, but doesn't ask why he'd never heard of Remus Lupin untill his 3rd year at Hogwarts, nor does he think it's odd that everybody knows about his abusive home life but doesn't actually do anything.

• No More Mysteries

  (#) noylj 2010-10-13 11:07:07 PM

  It is one of those great mysteries why everyone always allows Harry to go back to an abusive home. If it wasn't simply a plot-driven plot hole, one would think that there isn't a single adult, any where, who has any interest in Harry's well-being.
  Remus is not Harry' friend and he couldn't even take care of his wife or child. He is a failure--to Harry, to Sirius, to Lily and James, and to Tonks and Teddy.

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