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Balancing Debts

Actions have consequences, even if you're not aware of them. Harry saved Hermione's life their first year at Hogwarts. Now she has returned the favor and has no reason to stay by his side, or does ...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst,Romance - Characters: Harry,Hermione - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2010/10/18 - Updated: 2010/10/18 - 2097 words

Reviews

• Balancing Debts

  (#) Cateagle 2010-10-18 10:40:31 AM

  Nice, and as valid a reason for Hermione showing any interest in Ron as I've seen. I do expect they'll not wait now that they've admitted their real feelings and come, and cum, to an agreement. Ron's going to be just SOL when he returns and who's going to care?

• Balancing Debts

  (#) Jden 2010-10-18 02:04:01 PM

  That's twice now that you've posted stories with a unique and logical twist. Thanks for sharing and I hope you continue.

• Balancing Debts

  (#) mwinter 2010-10-18 08:23:09 PM

  Interesting. Here's a whole though. Isn't Ginny under the same conditions?

  Author's response

  when you say, "whole", do you mean a plot hole? If that's the case, then no. Hermione got into trouble in this story because she unintentionally tried to fulfill her life debt and that created her problem. Ginny, on the other hand, is a pureblood daughter of purebloods. I would not be surprised if Molly (nee Prewitt) Weasley and Arthur explained life debts to her in great detail, so she would be unlikely to trigger it in such a way.

• Balancing Debts

  (#) longreachjones 2010-10-22 07:32:50 PM

  Marvelous, just marvelous. As the Romans would say... Vidi, Veni.
  
  

• Balancing Debts

  (#) LabRat 2010-11-22 03:32:12 PM

  That's an interesting twist to why Hermione ended up with Ron. Funny how fanfic authors seem to come up with more logical reasons (oddly enough few of them involving real love) than Rowling gave us.

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