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• Original Sin

  (#) MCRmygirl 2010-11-27

  I have read only the first two chapters of his story, and see no reason why it should be rated this low. I find it beautifully written and quite original. I have never before read a story from Narcissa's perspective, and I find it very insightful and quite good. Pay no heed to the bad ratings and keep writing. :)
  
  ~Fallen Avenging Angel

  Author's response

  Oh my, thanks so much for such a kind review! hugs I was getting a bit depressed with all the bad reviews. I'm loving your story, btw. Hope you keep it up! Hope you keep reading this too. lol :D

• Original Sin

  (#) godessoftrees 2010-11-29

  There were two things that bothered me about this chapter. First is that Bellatrix would never say "ya'll". It can be hard to write fanfiction if you're from the south, I know as I'm from South Carolina. I would try to change that though. Also, Bellatrix sounds a lot older than she is. She's only twelve, but the way she speaks she sounds much older.
  
  Other than that I really enjoyed this chapter. This story is definitely very unique!

  Author's response

  Thanks so much for the suggestions! I'll edit out the "y'all" part. I totally get what you mean about having problems writing fanfic if you're from the south. =/ And I'll keep that in mind with Bella.
  
  Thanks for taking the time to review! I hope you continued to read. :D

• Original Sin

  (#) aerosmith14 2010-12-10

  Bad reviews suck. I've noticed that all your stories have getting either bad reviews or bad ratings, but you know what? Fuck it. Ignore those people and continue writing.

  Author's response

  Thanks. :) A lot of people don't seem to like my writing style, but oh well. It gives me something to do and it's my best time waster. lol

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