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Year Two: Spring Term
11 reviewsAs Second year winds down, work on the project continues, Harry and Neville make plans for the summer and other stuff happens
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Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) stick97 2010-10-28
Love that man code!
good to see sirius has his priorities straight. I am curious who the witch is though.
wouldn't remus smell the rat on Harry?Author's response
- Not half as curious as Sirius was...
- I'm not a fan of 'enhanced senses on a untransformed were' so no.Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) heren10 2010-10-28
Great to see you back, I need some intelligent Harry after reading some of the stuff out here. Logic wizards, Logic is great!Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) dennisud 2010-10-28
Like the pacing and how he's a typical Teen with the girls friends and more.
I can see Peter getting out and about but I wouldn't mind seeing him get a rats justice in this!
BTW I think Sirius should do more super hero stuff and drag Remus along (With some wolfsbane) to get a new life so to speak!
;-)Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) TxA_GunFighter 2010-10-28
Outstanding chapter to a great story.
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(#) BenRG 2010-11-03
A nice chapter. I enjoyed Harry's conversation with Remus. Both he and Sirius need to learn to see Harry on his terms, not on the terms that they want (James Mk2). The boy is very different and, frankly, both of them need to accept their responsibilities in that area.
Poor Harry! Confusion with girls is something every growing boy has to tackle and now appears to be his time! Tracey probably does have a small crush on Harry. However, girls are generally more affectionate and physical than boys, so hugs and kisses are more common. Harry is just going to have to learn to handle this fact.
As we saw from Hermione and Padma's interaction, the confusion is mutual, mostly due to those pesky hormones switching 'on'. Lots of girls and boys are going to have to start working out the difference between 'friendship' and 'romance' over the coming year, methinks.
So... Mass-produced runic computers? It could be done if aluminium is the optimum medium (or at least better than stone). More interestingly, it opens the possibility of mass-produced Runic magic as a general product. Ward... er... cans and other rune-based magical apperatus (scrying mirrors, etc.), quickly mass-produced by photo-etching and flooding the market, meaning that anyone can afford home defences of the highest level!
Harry Stark changes the world again! Something tells me that this is going to become something of a habit.
It's always good to seem more of this fine story. Don't stop now!Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) axelrajr 2010-11-04
awsome stuff. that bit with teh aluminum was funny, but i actually missed it first time through. the long 'u' didn't register as such.
glad to see activity on teh fic though. its been a lot of fun so far.Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) VampHunter001 2011-01-05
Excellent! Being a father I can see the pine wood derby perfectly! Was my favorite part. I really hope to see more!Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) Worry 2011-08-07
update damn you! UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) AMWOODco 2011-09-07
Just read this whole story through. Lovely. I enjoyed the many cameoes, though it's worth noting that you committed the ever so serious comic fan crime of mentioning a DC comic character (Bruce Wayne) in a story set in one of the (many) Marvel universes. My comic fan friends would be truly appalled (if any of them ever read fanfiction... their loss).
Also, just something to poke a bit of fun at. Being an honest Canuck and having one foot in the U.K., one foot in the U.S. and my eyes towards the arctic (don't ask why), I would say that it is pronouned A-lu-mi-num and not A-lum-i-num. It's also worth noting that the British pronounciation is used to describe an alloy of alluminum and titanium this side of the Atlantic.
Also, a note of curiosity. This story has been sitting idle for (checks date) over ten months now. Is it dead or simply on extended leave without pay? I ask because it is excellent and while I have little talent in writing myself, I do enjoy giving encouragement to those who do.
Bravo, once again.Author's response
- Actually I've stop posting on Ficwad because the interface for uploading to the site has just become far too much work. I spent an hour and an half attempting to upload a chapter to Sun Source and that was just the last straw. All my stories, including at least one and maybe two more chapters for Technomage (I forget where I was in that on for Ficwad) are on ff.net and fanficauthors
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