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Year Two: Spring Term
11 ReviewsAs Second year winds down, work on the project continues, Harry and Neville make plans for the summer and other stuff happens
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Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) stick97 2010-10-28 02:13:35 PM
Love that man code!
good to see sirius has his priorities straight. I am curious who the witch is though.
wouldn't remus smell the rat on Harry?Author's response
- Not half as curious as Sirius was...
- I'm not a fan of 'enhanced senses on a untransformed were' so no. -
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(#) heren10 2010-10-28 05:59:12 PM
Great to see you back, I need some intelligent Harry after reading some of the stuff out here. Logic wizards, Logic is great! -
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(#) dennisud 2010-10-28 06:37:18 PM
Like the pacing and how he's a typical Teen with the girls friends and more.
I can see Peter getting out and about but I wouldn't mind seeing him get a rats justice in this!
BTW I think Sirius should do more super hero stuff and drag Remus along (With some wolfsbane) to get a new life so to speak!
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(#) TxA_GunFighter 2010-10-28 08:09:01 PM
Outstanding chapter to a great story.
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(#) noylj 2010-10-31 05:14:01 PM
Great story.
Have no idea what Herms means by "dating Harry would be like dating her brother." Can not believe any one would have that feeling for someone...unless Herms only really likes girls.
I can not believe that that total wuss Remus hasn't really considered how much Bumbles has screwed him and Sirius and Harry and harry's parents and Nev's parents and the whole WW.
Just hearing that Harry was dumped on a doorstep at night in November with people who hate magic was enough for me to have no respect for Bumbles....and that is pure canon.
The man is a waste of space and should have been euthanized years ago.
Then there is the missing 24 hours...where was Harry when the WW was celebrating and Minnie was at the Dursleys (not knowing that Bumbles was going to drop Harry off there and without Bumbles knowing she was going to be there and none of that part of canon made any sense but I kept hoping that JKR would explain it all in book 7 but all she did was create the poorest excuse for a book I have ever seen and, yes, this is a run-on sentence but it just makes me so mad). -
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(#) BenRG 2010-11-03 05:45:38 AM
A nice chapter. I enjoyed Harry's conversation with Remus. Both he and Sirius need to learn to see Harry on his terms, not on the terms that they want (James Mk2). The boy is very different and, frankly, both of them need to accept their responsibilities in that area.
Poor Harry! Confusion with girls is something every growing boy has to tackle and now appears to be his time! Tracey probably does have a small crush on Harry. However, girls are generally more affectionate and physical than boys, so hugs and kisses are more common. Harry is just going to have to learn to handle this fact.
As we saw from Hermione and Padma's interaction, the confusion is mutual, mostly due to those pesky hormones switching 'on'. Lots of girls and boys are going to have to start working out the difference between 'friendship' and 'romance' over the coming year, methinks.
So... Mass-produced runic computers? It could be done if aluminium is the optimum medium (or at least better than stone). More interestingly, it opens the possibility of mass-produced Runic magic as a general product. Ward... er... cans and other rune-based magical apperatus (scrying mirrors, etc.), quickly mass-produced by photo-etching and flooding the market, meaning that anyone can afford home defences of the highest level!
Harry Stark changes the world again! Something tells me that this is going to become something of a habit.
It's always good to seem more of this fine story. Don't stop now! -
Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage
(#) axelrajr 2010-11-04 04:54:53 PM
awsome stuff. that bit with teh aluminum was funny, but i actually missed it first time through. the long 'u' didn't register as such.
glad to see activity on teh fic though. its been a lot of fun so far. -
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(#) VampHunter001 2011-01-05 11:21:10 PM
Excellent! Being a father I can see the pine wood derby perfectly! Was my favorite part. I really hope to see more! -
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(#) Worry 2011-08-07 06:23:32 PM
update damn you! UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!