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Winter star
(#) GoddessFire 2010-11-14
Oooooooo mystery I likey! But do u think u could make them longer? Add a little more elabortion? A little more info on her family? What she looks like? Waiting for the next chapters... ~NatalieAuthor's response
thank you:D I would go alittle bit more into her family but she mostly hates them And I try to make them longer I just like dramtic endings to chapters so they will be cut short and I'm trying my best. Ikeep reading and forget to update heh. Really, hes not anything. I don't think you could put a word to it cause in his world their all like that. But I will give more to that one^^ I reformed it and have a better plot but this isn't all mine my friend azure helped alot. He's in most of my stories has the jack ass whos my best friendWinter star
(#) GoddessFire 2010-11-14
Oooooooo mystery I likey! But do u think u could make them longer? Add a little more elabortion? A little more info on her family? What she looks like? Waiting for the next chapters... ~NatalieWinter star
(#) quietliar 2011-04-21
I agre that they sould be a little longer but this story is really good can't waitfor you to update it :)
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