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Do I know him?

by jadesohma 3 Reviews

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Category: Romance - Rating: PG - Genres: Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2010/11/05 - Updated: 2010/11/06 - 475 words

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  • Winter star

    (#) GoddessFire 2010-11-14 10:43:59 AM

    Oooooooo mystery I likey! But do u think u could make them longer? Add a little more elabortion? A little more info on her family? What she looks like? Waiting for the next chapters... ~Natalie

    Author's response

    thank you:D I would go alittle bit more into her family but she mostly hates them And I try to make them longer I just like dramtic endings to chapters so they will be cut short and I'm trying my best. Ikeep reading and forget to update heh. Really, hes not anything. I don't think you could put a word to it cause in his world their all like that. But I will give more to that one^^ I reformed it and have a better plot but this isn't all mine my friend azure helped alot. He's in most of my stories has the jack ass whos my best friend
  • Winter star

    (#) GoddessFire 2010-11-14 10:44:03 AM

    Oooooooo mystery I likey! But do u think u could make them longer? Add a little more elabortion? A little more info on her family? What she looks like? Waiting for the next chapters... ~Natalie
  • Winter star

    (#) quietliar 2011-04-21 09:44:36 PM

    I agre that they sould be a little longer but this story is really good can't waitfor you to update it :)

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