by disturbedangel6
2 Reviews
Category: My Chemical Romance -
Rating: G - Genres: - Characters: -
Published: 2010/11/12 - Updated: 2010/11/12 - 1316 words
Reviews
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I think it's read-worthy (obviously, since I read it) but um, I'm kind of curious- you know that 'passed' refers to going (like "I passed by her on my way to work) and 'past' refers to the past? Like "The past few weeks blah blah blah"?
Sorry. I'm a bit of a grammar Nazi -.- It's like a curse, I swear..
But I like the idea you've got going for this. It's a big original:)
Author's response
Yep I do, but if I have wrote it wrong then I am sorry
I am slept check nerd too xD
But thanks (:
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(#) GoddessFire 2010-11-12 11:12:36 PM
Ok seriously... If. Had anymore rating points id rate you! And it would be an original! I love love love it! Really! I wish there was more posted! Please updated soon! ~Natalie
Author's response
Naww thanks (:
Well I shall be continuing this pretty soon