(#) Somerandomename001 2009-01-25I really like what you’ve done with this. Great premise, set up, build and pacing. The characterisation is insightful and I especially like how you’ve made use of Bridges’ powers within the plot. Well managed tension and subplots make this a fascinating and enjoyable read.
Is there anything I can say that will persuade you to continue this story?
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