Sky continues his interrogation of a disturbingly demented Morgana, as Kat and Kruger discuss her promotion, and Bridge becomes mysteriously ill. All in all, things get a little sticky. This chapte...
(#) Bridgechik 2006-12-19 04:25:18 AMThis is really good! PLEASE don't stop!
Author's responseSadly, I don't think I can continue this story. It was written during a period in my life when I wasn't sleeping much, so I'm very unhappy with the quality of writing, and I'm somewhat dissatisfied with the direction the plot was going. If I do continue with this story, it'll be a reimagining of the plot rather than a continuation of this particular piece. Sorry.
(#) Somerandomename001 2009-01-25 05:59:03 AMI really like what you’ve done with this. Great premise, set up, build and pacing. The characterisation is insightful and I especially like how you’ve made use of Bridges’ powers within the plot. Well managed tension and subplots make this a fascinating and enjoyable read.
Is there anything I can say that will persuade you to continue this story?