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Quiet Time
20 ReviewsAfter the fight with Pan, Atlanta is more confused on how she feels towards Archie than ever. And although they don't share a kiss, or say the 'L' word- she can enjoy every moment with him knowing ...
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(#) Coral 2006-05-10 02:01:57 PM
It was adorable, but don't you think it would take some time for Atlanta to start liking a guy right after getting dumped by Pan? Plus they wouldn't really sleep together on the couch at that age...Author's response
Thank you for the review- and I understand where you're comming from with those thoughts. But the thing is (in my mind at least) I don't think Pan and Atlanta really, really liked each other and, as it was said in the story, she wasn't all that depressed, because she does secretly love Archie ;) And you wouldn't believe how those things can happen, falling asleep on the couch and all, it just shows how much they trust each other, but I understand what you mean! -
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(#) Sean Connery 2006-05-10 03:32:56 PM
Aww, I loved that story, vair cute. I was a tad unsure about the arm-over-Atlanta thing (cause Archie's real shy around her, I didn't think he would do that) but it worked.
Vair good story. :)
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(#) StinkFace 2006-05-13 08:03:15 PM
SO CUTTTE!!! Always liked this story. Very cute. And yes since there is no cute and fluffy it shall be Hot. Ahaha.
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(#) Gryph 2006-05-15 04:58:08 PM
guilty wave I thought I reviewed this... Maybe I only thought I did. I know I read several things here before signing up, so this may have been one of them.
I have to disagree with the comment that at their age, they wouldn't be falling asleep together like that. I've done that often enough with guys I trust, and like you, I think that even if Atlanta hasn't quite clued in, she trusts Archie that much.
And I liked it because it wasn't all passionate declaration of love-ish. It seems much more natural.Author's response
Haha, that's alright, I'm just glad you reviewed now. And thanks for agreeing with me, that's the main point I was trying to get out in their realationship was that they don't exactly 'LIKE-like' each other at that age, their trust in each other is that strong, no matter what happens. And yeah, I don't think Archie and Atlanta's actualy relationship will ever be all passionate and filled with the 'L' word. It is much more natural and develops out of their very strong friendship. Thanks for reviewing! ~Demenior -
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(#) Pheonee 2006-05-29 03:42:40 AM
You know, this is one of my favourite stories. Very subtle approach to the fact that he has a grade AAA crush on her and she is oblivious ;) It's one of the few things I don't like about Atlanta, apart from the fact that she's cocky and overcompetitive, she won't notice that big a crush on her, not even when it's just staring her in the face!! :oAuthor's response
haha, thank you. That's basically one of the main points I was going for with this story, that Archie and Atlanta CAN get together in fanfictions, like how a lot of peopl have them falling in love and everything, but in 'reality', they aren't. I was trying to show that we can still have nice moments with them, even if it's not an 'I LIKE-like you' ...I just don't believe in love at their/our age. Thank you very much for the review
~Demenior -
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(#) Kathrinewoot 2006-05-30 06:29:36 PM
It's really good, Demenior! I really, really, really think you should write a second chapter soon!!! AWESOME WRITING! -
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(#) Random Person 2006-06-24 07:11:33 PM
lick Person, I'm gonna fall off the chair then pnce on you on the blankies >:) see yeah there. -
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(#) Topacio 2006-06-24 10:51:17 PM
Awwwww! So cute! A/A = They're the cutest couple in the show! Loved this story: nice and short. Just = perfect. ^ - ^