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• From the Diary of Severus- Year One

  (#) theVerb 2010-11-28

  Um, why would anyone sign their own journal or diary? Seriously, why did he sign his name? It's Severus' diary meaning that he is the only one writting it so why would he feel the need to sign it? We already know the entry was written by Snape.

  Author's response

  Okay, I appreciate the constructive criticism, but that was a bit much. Does it matter? He signed it because he felt the need. It plays into the story later. Move on. Leave comments, but don't nitpick about things that don't quite matter.
  
  ~Fallen Avenging Angel

• From the Diary of Severus- Year One

  (#) Richardc269 2010-11-29

  It matters because we're the ones reading it. Please use your brain before giving people shit, kay? Thanks. Btw, your story isn't that great. Try writing about someone else other than a child abuser, and write longer chapters.

  Author's response

  Okay, you are possibly the most spiteful person I've seen on here. I don't aim to please everyone, got it? I write because it pleases me. An if dimwit else likes it, then Good for them. If not? Their loss. This story, once again, was written at 3 IN THE MORNING. I'd like to see you write well that early. I wrote it for me. If you're not reading it because of something as simple as short chapters or the signing of a journal, then I fell sorry for the others you've reviewed on.
  
  And Severus is one of the best characters in the series. I don't give people crap unless they for me crap. When someone's trying to help, I'm grateful. But when someone's being spiteful, I fight back. Please get over your obsession with nagging at people you don't know.

• From the Diary of Severus- Year One

  (#) ImNotRomeo 2010-11-30

  Your chapets aren't long enough to make a chapter, your concept is lacking, and in general, this story isn't worth the time it took to appear on my screen.
  
  I agree that Severus is a complex character with much to offer, however, you fail to convey anything but an insipid disregard for what literature looks like.
  
  And btw, 'Sevvy', is a retarded nickname. Please never use it again. Ever.

• From the Diary of Severus- Year One

  (#) ImNotRomeo 2010-11-30

  Here is a Severitus fic worth reading, it's a little angsty and not to my usual taste, but the author took a subject/type of fic, and made it worth my time to read, even though I'd usually flame the hell out of a writer that used this storyline and move on to the next fic.
  
  The author made it worth reading with his/her writing style and ability. Learn from this author and try to be worth reading, too.

• From the Diary of Severus- Year One

  (#) maddiemcdaniel 2010-12-16

  first two commentors need to shut up its fine to ask why he signs his journal entrys but to nag and nag and nag about it is just ludicrous one simple question is all u need not nag after nag so please dont offend my bestie because im sure her stories are better than yours
  

  Author's response

  Thanks, Addie. :)

• From the Diary of Severus- Year One

  (#) maddiemcdaniel 2010-12-18

  ily honey bunchez of oatz

• From the Diary of Severus- Year One

  (#) MyNameOkay 2011-02-06

  ^^^ Haha i say that all the time..
  
  Anyway! again, it's just pointless for people to bash. I mean, i understand the story isn't that great, but really.
  
  Dont be offended by THOSE kind of negative reviews. They serious shouldn't be talking..
  
  MNO

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