(#) TheGiinger 2010-12-16THAT WAS A HARRY POTTER QUOTE!!
minus the 'little', Hermione says that to Draco in the third one. Wow. Nerd alert.
It's really good, detailed and precise. Nice.
Can't wait for Mikey and Ray! Update soon!
Love Rachael xo
Author's responseLol yup! I'm glad I'm not the only Harry Potter nerd out there! Yeah, I couldn't remember the exact quote and didn't have time to check... :)
And Mikey's chapter is next... Bring on the thievery!! And the reunion of the brothers... (mysterious laugh)
(#) TheForgottenMCRmy 2010-12-16that was awesome :) i love how gerard is just all like "oh, i murdered a rapist" like he doesn't care. that made me smile. lol :) loved it.
Author's responseI thought you'd like that, Ker. :)
Yeah, he's all like, "I'm a murderer. It's cool."
>X( Bob as an angry Chinese man!! Lol!
(#) Jetblackheartattack 2010-12-16I like this story too much. I keep imagining for no reason at all that it's set in the the 30's or something. And I see them all old fashiony and whatnot. Ha. Weird I know.
Author's responseLol I know right?! When I was writing it, I was like, "Okay this is the twenty-first century. So WHY do they sound like they just walked out of the pioneer days?!" Lol!!!
(#) insert_name_here 2010-12-27:P is the next chapter coming soon?? 'Cause I really wanna read it!! And also, Mikey's the thief? I thought he'd be the hacker... gasp is he a ninja? It would be so cool if he was a ninja!
Author's responseSorry, not a ninja. But he IS very awesome. :)
I will upload a new chapter as soon as possible. It has been kind of hectic, what with the holidays and all... :)
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