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Countdown To Fate

Harry's life after he is adopted, culminating with his last day as a "normal" person

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Crossover - Characters: Harry - Warnings: [?] - Published: 2010/12/18 - Updated: 2010/12/19 - 9085 words

Reviews

• Harry James Parker?

  (#) longreachjones 2010-12-19 12:36:00 PM

  Very nice premise, I can see a very good story coming of this.
  
  HOWEVER, this chapter feels to me like you just info dumped 2 or 3 chapters worth of story into a single chapter. Heck there are several sections of this chapter that could be fleshed out into whole chapters.
  
  Moving the story along is fine, but please, please don't rush it.

• Harry James Parker?

  (#) jjracer24 2010-12-21 07:12:45 PM

  Good stuff, can't wait to see what else you come up with - keep it coming.

• Harry James Parker?

  (#) pott4grager 2012-08-21 01:13:57 PM

  What a load of absolute rubbish! Not even finished.

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