Gerard is in the hospital...it was supposed to be Frank, but he was saved
(#) TakeThisToMyGrave 2010-12-23 01:42:27 AMSticks bottom lip out
This was rather upsetting.
But I'm glad Gerard ended up alright!
You could perhaps have drawn on Frankie's guilt a little more, maybe gone into more depth and detail. But, otherwise, this was really good. I enjoyed :)
Author's responsethank you :)
i might just go back and edit it a little
(#) Jetblackheartattack 2010-12-23 11:26:20 AMIt's really sad but cute. The only thing I can say to improve it is that you should have made it longer. But that's a little biased on my part because I was just wanting to read more. I liked it a lot.
Author's responsehaha aw thanks love :)