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It's Not Your Fault

Gerard is in the hospital...it was supposed to be Frank, but he was saved

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: G - Genres: Drama - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way - Warnings: [V] [?] - Published: 2010/12/22 - Updated: 2010/12/23 - 804 words - Complete

Reviews

• It's Not Your Fault

  (#) TakeThisToMyGrave 2010-12-23 01:42:27 AM

  Sticks bottom lip out
  This was rather upsetting.
  Smiles
  But I'm glad Gerard ended up alright!
  You could perhaps have drawn on Frankie's guilt a little more, maybe gone into more depth and detail. But, otherwise, this was really good. I enjoyed :)
  xoxox
  -Frankie.

  Author's response

  thank you :)
  i might just go back and edit it a little

• It's Not Your Fault

  (#) xxMloewxx 2010-12-23 04:12:01 AM

  I really like your storie!
  And it was perfect! :)
  Hope Gerard will get better soon!

  Author's response

  thank you!
  and I'm sure he will, just for Frank :)

• It's Not Your Fault

  (#) Jetblackheartattack 2010-12-23 11:26:20 AM

  It's really sad but cute. The only thing I can say to improve it is that you should have made it longer. But that's a little biased on my part because I was just wanting to read more. I liked it a lot.

  Author's response

  haha aw thanks love :)

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