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Chapter 1

by Luckystarz812 9 Reviews

Due to financial issues, Breanna is forced to live with her cousins, Gerard and Mikey.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama,Humor,Romance - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2011/02/01 - Updated: 2011/02/02 - 1595 words

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  • Young and Hopeless

    (#) KJLucidLove666 2011-02-01 03:22:56 PM

    points to screen That's me, that's me! I like this chapter, and I have a feeling that Breanna is a lot different than the boys think. :)
    xoxo
  • Young and Hopeless

    (#) vampiresdontglitter 2011-02-01 03:41:15 PM

    awesome start, I agree with KJlucidlove haha :D

    More soon!

    xo
  • Young and Hopeless

    (#) XxBrokenSoulxX 2011-02-01 07:06:57 PM

    points to screen also
    AHHHH THATS MEE!!!!!
    =D I has a feeling Im going to surprise them.
    I love this already!
    More soon please!!!
  • Young and Hopeless

    (#) DeathCookie 2011-02-01 07:18:02 PM

    Uh-oh..Like, like KJLucidLove666 might be right, but still I have a fishy feelings. Things are def. going to start off on a rocky trail. Over all this chapter sort of gave me a feeling of connection, you know? Like I was actually there! Which is good, because even if I wasn't chose to be a charecter, your writing style is real and relatable which I love! Update soon!

    xxxx
    PS: You don't always have to write Montgomery; it can be a pain in the ass. So just write Monty when you're firectly quoting me, or whatever works! :)

    Author's response

    Thank you!(: I still don't have any particular headig for this story, and I'm just honestly writing whatever pops into my head. Real and relatable, that's good.

    Oh and I don't mind writing Montgomery out, I like it. I'll use nicknames more often once a few more chapters are posted.
  • Young and Hopeless

    (#) KnivesAndPens 2011-02-01 10:41:56 PM

    Great start :)
    Update soon?
  • Young and Hopeless

    (#) shortygirl 2011-02-02 09:22:10 AM

    I'm likeing this
    update soon
  • Young and Hopeless

    (#) xluvxemxallx 2011-02-02 09:34:45 AM

    I love it I wonder how things are gonna go :) lol how Do you fail the third grade haha funny
    Anyway like I said I loved it can't wait till the next one :)
    Xo danni
  • Young and Hopeless

    (#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2011-06-07 01:40:48 PM

    I like that saying that the have:)
  • Young and Hopeless

    (#) Alexx95 2011-10-09 06:22:27 PM

    This was such an amazing start. :)

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