by MCRFREAK1996
1 Reviews
Category: My Chemical Romance -
Rating: R - Genres: Fantasy - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro -
Warnings: [?] - Chapters: 9 - Published: 2011/03/11 - Updated: 2011/04/22 - 16453 words
Reviews
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This story is in desperate need of the "Enter" or "Return" key. You HAVE to separate quotes by line breaks. It makes t one million percent easier to read. Also, you really need to start ending your sentences in periods. It gets really irritating when you've lost your place because the story is just one long sentence.