my first poem..please read? :)
I see you; your dreamy jade eyes, sparkle and shine,
enthusiasm, love, and dreams personified,
your sweet cherry lips, smiling, soft, divine,
round mine I know, will never entwine.
your raven hair, as velvet black as midnight,
that tickles your cheeks; wispy cobwebs,
silky black on smooth white.
I see you: every time, my heart flutters,
my cheeks flush, yet I can barely murmur,
how you mean so much, and never can i tell you,
how beautiful you shine,
the biggest, brightest star in my galaxy,
and you can never be mine.
what do you think?? please please R&R...i want to know if it's any good- please tell me if it's shit or not! thanks for reading :)
p.s. i can't think of a name for this...if you have any ideas i'd be really grateful :)