Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > "You'll never fit in much, kid."
Chapter Sixteen
14 reviewsBee's giggling fits, Frank's phone number, and Gerard's maths book...
5Exciting
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"You'll never fit in much, kid."
(#) xxMetalxFreak69 2011-03-27
Story's coming on really good. THough Gee does seem to a touch of pms mood swings doesn't he? o_oAuthor's response
lol yeah, he does...but i didn't think he was reacting enough to the fact he'd just discovered he was gay! xD glad you like it and thanks for reviewing :)
CosmicZombie xo"You'll never fit in much, kid."
(#) killjoy4life 2011-03-28
awwwww.....its sweet.i really like it y'know.keep writing!!Author's response
aww, thank you :) glad you like it and thanks for reviewing! xD
CosmicZombie xo"You'll never fit in much, kid."
(#) cup-full-of-blood 2011-03-28
Awww you know how much i love this story? Well this much
Straches arms out really wide hehe
Yeah this is just so awesome its really cute and sweet i loved gerards and franks momment awww gerard over reacted a bit about bee knowing but i sippose its understandable lol but who wouldnt love him ehh XD
This story always makes me smile so carry on and dont stress yourself too much give ur Time to relax and chill as i said dont rush take it easy :)
I hope you get through things i mean i could probs not go through what ur going through and do a story lol my slowness wouldnt help either haha
Oh and i'm so going to check out your story :) it looks good lol and u said u gave long reviews XD beat this one lol
Xx cozAuthor's response
awwww, thank you! :D smiles like smiling lunatic i love your reviews!! yeah, i kinda wanted to make Gerard over react a bit when he told Bee cause i thought he'd been too calm about it so far...i wanted him to kinda freak out a little lol xD
thanks, but story writing usually helps me feel better, so i hope i'll keep going!
sorry if things are going a bit slow atm but things will get interesting soon- promise! xD
thanks for reviewing and hope you enjoy the other story :)
CosmicZombie xo"You'll never fit in much, kid."
(#) cup-full-of-blood 2011-03-28
umm okay so on my phone my review looked much longer XD
haha lol
yeah well this is brill and yeah your right so yeah he should of freaked a little :)
i love frankie he is so cute
oh i see then do it all the more hehe :D
oh no it's fine i like it, its more realistic that way i kinda hate it when they get together to quick and then the rest of it is kinda crap lol that sounds like my 'hold your breath' eepp :/
but yeah the past is fine
oh i love this so i garantee i will love your other one
xx cozAuthor's response
thanks :) yeah, i find it easier to write about them when it takes a while for them to actually get together- it's just more like the way i guess i'd do things in real life if i was them lol :P and noooo! i love 'hold your breath, kid' the fact they get together sooner suits that story :) which reminds me...i need to go review the latest chapter! ooops!
i knooow, Frankie is just too cute haaha! hope i'm keeping the characters different enough from eachother- i find that kinda hard sometimes! D:
anyway, i'm gunna go review your 'hold your breath, kid' now xD
thanks for your reviewing awesomeness!
CosmicZombie xo"You'll never fit in much, kid."
(#) GreenDaySavedMyLife 2011-03-28
AHHHHHH(: Thank you for updating! I LOVE LOVE LOVE it!!Author's response
hehehe thank yoooou!! glad you like it :D thanks for reviewing :D
CosmicZombie xo"You'll never fit in much, kid."
(#) JamzKilljoy97 2011-03-28
Pleasepleaseplease you have to update REAL soon! :D:D This is my new addiction! I have to have more soon or I'll go all withdrawal symptomish and crazy! :D Pweeeeaaaasssee? Zoe xoAuthor's response
hahaha thank you! glad you're ummm...addicted lol xD i'll update in a few days hopefully :) thanks for reviewing!
CosmicZombie xo"You'll never fit in much, kid."
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2011-03-28
probs ur best chapter so far! really emotional and great writing! loved it! give yourself a pat on the back.Author's response
awww, thank you! means a lot :) glad you liked it xD
CosmicZombie xo"You'll never fit in much, kid."
(#) jadesohma 2011-03-29
I love this and I always have. And I'm sorry about your friend (sorry to bring it up)Send him my love:) And update as soon as you can. Please and thank youAuthor's response
aww, thank you- it means a lot, really thoughtful of you :) glad you're liking the story- reviews like these really keep me going! i'll update soon xD
CosmicZombie xo"You'll never fit in much, kid."
(#) FlyingSmoke 2011-03-31
For you, in your time of doubt, this was very good. It wasn't exactly a filler, so it worked for the short update it was. Keep going strong and living each day, keeping in mind that there are people who watch and wait for you."You'll never fit in much, kid."
(#) MyBloodyTearsFall 2011-03-31
Frankie and Gee are soooo cute!! Love your writing style by the way. Hehehe Bee's reaction couldnt stop making me laugh. Good job on this!
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