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Chapter Eighteen
17 ReviewsArt competitions, scary physics equations and bad decisions...
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"You'll never fit in much, kid."
(#) Savagella666 2011-04-07 06:58:06 AM
really good :) please write more! you described the painting really well :P
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thank you :) glad you like it and thanks for reviewing!
CosmicZombie xo -
"You'll never fit in much, kid."
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2011-04-07 09:16:38 AM
nooo thats so depressing! evil aled >:( he destroyed a well described piece of art! update soon, it was a great chapterAuthor's response
sorry, and yeah, he is evil lol xD glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing!
CosmicZombie xo -
"You'll never fit in much, kid."
(#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2011-04-07 09:51:54 AM
wow i love how you described the paintingAuthor's response
thank you :)
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"You'll never fit in much, kid."
(#) GreenDaySavedMyLife 2011-04-07 10:23:01 AM
excuse my language, but HOLY SHIT. This is INCREDIBLE! The description in the painting and the details of his eyes and their emotions made me feel like I was actually there it was intense! I wonder though, if Aled destroyed the painting of if Gerard did out of pure disappointment of a seeming betrayal. Yeah, I'm rambling, but this is amazing!! please update soon! This is one of my favorites! Scratch that this is my favorite!!Author's response
awww, thank you so much :D smiles like crazy person means a lot you like my story! so glad you thought the descriptions were okay...i wasn't sure haha! awww, can't believe this is your favourite!! thank yooou :D i've actually written the next chapter- it just needs typing up and i should update tomorrow or the day after, so you'll find out who actually destroyed the painting :)
thanks for the review!
CosmicZombie xo -
"You'll never fit in much, kid."
(#) FlyingSmoke 2011-04-07 12:11:45 PM
Holy damn.
Wish I could get Gerard's art and base my wardrobe and room off of it... Even in words, that was 'fuckin' amazing!' I mean, the twilight and the blood... That wasn't weird at all! Dead, gnarled trees can be very beautiful! :(
The end of the chapter with Aled and Gerard's painting made my sad. I mean, why can't Frank just grow a set?! Aled, for god's sake, might be able to make Frank's life a hell, but I'm getting the vibes that Frank can make Aled's life a LIVING hell. So why doesn't he... ):( And, and and... When will there be Ferard!!
Sorry, my review is extremely long and I sound like a stalker following the fiction closely, like the eyes in Gerard's mangled art, and... Update soon.Author's response
glad you like Gerard's artwork :) i thought it sounded...Gerardish lol xD
and yes, you're right...Frank could make Aled's life a living hell..just give him time..xD there will be frerard very very soon actually...sooner than you'd expect :P and i love long reviews, so thank you! and nooo you don;t sound like a stalker- it's awesome you like this :) i should be able to update tomorrow or the next day :)
thank yooou :D
CosmicZombie xo -
"You'll never fit in much, kid."
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-04-07 12:13:33 PM
wow that picture sounds awesome! update soon i really want to know what happens next!!!!!!Author's response
haha thanks :) will do and thank you for reviewing!
CosmicZombie xo -
"You'll never fit in much, kid."
(#) jadesohma 2011-04-07 01:32:41 PM
I wanna cry! NOOO! BAD FRANKIE! GO BACK TO GERARD! >.< Loved it though:)Author's response
aww, sorry lol! don't worry, things will get better soon :) glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing!
CosmicZombie xo -
"You'll never fit in much, kid."
(#) andreajp 2011-04-07 04:30:32 PM
Hell if I was Frankie, I would have done the same thing too, until I had a baseball bat! I was wondering the same thing as Green Day along the line of if Gerard rip his painting or not. I ran out of rating points so until I get more I am going to make my own....+1(this story is just like crack, one chapter isn`t enough!).....love the story looking forward to the next chapter!Author's response
aww, thank you, so glad you like it :) yeah, you'll find out tomorrow or the next day who ruined the painting- i wanted to make it so as you weren't quite sure who actually did it. thank you so much for the review :D
CosmicZombie xo -
"You'll never fit in much, kid."
(#) MyBloodyTearsFall 2011-04-07 06:12:24 PM
Ahhhhhhh I just wanted to tackel Aled and slap him across the face. Poor Gerard!!! Ayeeee Frankie why?!?!?!Author's response
i know, me too haha! i know, i felt really bad for gerard too, but it kinda had to be like this :/ thanks for the review!
CosmicZombie xo -
"You'll never fit in much, kid."
(#) purplebunny 2011-04-07 08:09:26 PM
i looooooooooooove it :) aled is an ass... please write more :)Author's response
aww, thank yoou :D yeah, he is lol
i'm hopefully updating tomorrow :D
thanks for the review!
CosmicZombie xo