(#) xx_eddi_xx 2011-04-10motherfucker this brought some shit back. god, are you in my fucking life, woman?
the same shit happened to me like a few weeks back. only slightly different. either way, it involved me and my girlfriend getting into it and i hit her and she was terrified of me cos she didnt realize how i get when i get pissed...its some fucked up shit, man. my meds usually help but...
yeah, this chapter touched me like you dont even fuckin know...
but whatever. i read it and im gonna leave this review before theres more blood spilt.
(#) Kill_the_mainstream 2011-04-10Wow, the last line just drove it home, ya know? It is such a touching song already, but with that powerful story to go behind it, BAM
I don't hate you for writing this chapter, because we all know that it was completely necessary. Gerard went through some tough times in that period between Revenge and Parade, so it must be included in this story. Once again, good job with this chapter, I will definitely rate it =] (when I typed that, my IPod Touch, which I am typing this on, auto-corrected the word 'rate' to 'rape'. Now I'm not sure whether or not to be afraid that my IPod might be a rapist, or that it thinks I'M a rapist...)
(#) DeathCookie 2011-04-10This touched quite a sore spot..I don't think I can comment on this chapter too much. It was touching and, well, scary to read because I've been in similar situations. God, they have to live through this (Live Through This is an excellent Hole album, btw)!
(#) Kill_the_mainstream 2011-04-10Oh, and my trip was okay, thank you for asking! =) I got home safe, which was good.
I love how you connect with your readers not just as an author, but as a friend. I'm able to think of you as Lauren, not as unitedsuck007, so I am even more eager to read what you write =)
- If anyone says that you are a bitch for making them fight is a complete and utter dumb fuck. I wish that Trainwreak wasn`t a negative, so lets pretend it isn`t. I wanted to look away because it made me so sad, I just happy that he is going to get help.... right?
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